Lynx, repressed wanderluster. ([info]daniela_lynx) wrote,
@ 2008-07-07 16:23:00
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Current location:Tamaki!Laptop
Current mood: *Wanting to write, dammit*
Current music:Dream On - Depeche Mode

Fic: Persona 3 [Eng]
Title: Dream On
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 443
Pairing/Characters: Minato, Ryoji, Aigis.

Warnings: Spoilers right 'till the end of Persona 3/The Journey
Beta: [info]izkariote <333 Thanks hun!
A/N: Mostly gen, but there's subtext too.




Minato barely opens his eyes, then sighs. The sky has a color that seems almost impossible for him, so brilliant and blue. It prompts him to sit up.

Aigis doesn't notice. Almost in a trance, she is still murmuring sweet nothings, promises. There are steps echoing in the stairs, and Minato knows they are from his friends. He stands up then, walks two steps to the railing and looks downwards. The school's ceiling is not that high up. There is a flow of students moving down there, coming from the Auditorium, speaking.

It is always about communication, he muses.

They look so trivial, (so happy). It was Graduation Day, a moment to celebrate. Planning and fearing, those would come after the euphoria vanished a bit.

"People are afraid of death because they think there's nothing else after," Ryoji greets him, putting a hand on his shoulder.

Minato just nods at first, quiet. Then he says: "And they are right." Words come out tiny, they sound strange in his ears. He notices then that he is still wearing the earphones, and takes them off. They hang almost heavy on the collar of his jacket.

Ryoji leans on the railing by his side, slides a hand until it covers his. He gives Minato a little pat, reassuring him in silence with a serenity he never had before. 'In life', Minato wanted to think, but the mere notion was strange. He couldn't, not with everything he knew.

"Oh. It seems that's still difficult for you to understand some stuff." Ryoji comments after a while. Minato plays with his earphones without getting what he means, and too tired to make the effort to. The other grins at him. "But it's okay. Even I have changed my perception..."

"Which one?"

"There are no absolute truths!" Ryoji laughs with Pharos' laughter, a sound that was not quite teasing. A sound that might even be affectionate. "Not even dying is now such a sure thing, isn't it great? And so easy..."

Minato's expression is peaceful. He glances a last time to the body he left behind, cradled in Aigis' lap. He can watch himself breathing. His smile falters a bit, for a second he thinks he would've liked another thing. Another ending.

He remembers, then, the promises he made. The promises he got. He remembers contracts, (social) links and his choices.

No, no. This is how it should be.

"Let's go," He says to Ryoji, and they both disappear from the scene.

Down there S.E.E.S. gets to reunite with full knowledge of themselves, after three months. They greet. They hug, everyone. They have been through so much.

They're still smiling.




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[info]arence_heart
2008-07-08 04:18 am UTC (link)
Damn Lynx me hiciste llorar.
Es bueno, es muy, muy bueno. "Ryoji laughs with Pharos' laughter" Mejor oración ever. Solo de imaginármelo me da cosa, escalofrios junto con algo lindo, no se.

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[info]daniela_lynx
2008-07-08 04:42 am UTC (link)
O-ow, en serio? *ESTRUJA* Es q-que el final del canon es tristísimo y frustrante y. Había que repararlo.

Que bueno que no he perdido mi toque :'DDD Me gusta la idea de Ryoji con esas pequeñas similitudes. (Y bueno, Pharos es medio creepy pero ¿si o no que es adorable? <3)

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[info]finalmistake
2008-07-08 04:20 am UTC (link)
That was beautiful. The ending was perfect. <3 And I absolutly love the vague, abstract format. Good job.

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[info]daniela_lynx
2008-07-08 04:44 am UTC (link)
*Blushes* I put a lot of thought and work on this one, and it makes me very happy you liked its style <3 Thank you!

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[info]lira_alicia
2008-07-08 04:34 am UTC (link)
Está preciosoooooo!! Cruel como él solo, pero precioso de todos modos T__T. Y concuerdo con arence... me dio repelús imaginarme a Ryoji riéndose con la voz de Pharos, al menos con la del doblaje.

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[info]daniela_lynx
2008-07-08 04:37 am UTC (link)
No sé si cruel... creo que era más cruel el pinche final abierto que nos dejaron, me gusta imaginar que Minato y Ryoji se fueron a recorrer el universo por ahí. Porque LALALA~ FES no existeee~

Looool, ¿otra más? Y a mi que me encantaba la voz de Pharos X'DDD En fin. Me alegró muchísimo que le gustara, mija linda. Gracias <33

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[info]relmneiko
2008-07-08 08:50 am UTC (link)
I like how you didn't try to fill in the blanks by trying to explain too much, but rather embellished the ending (if that makes any sense). It's best when it's mysterious<3

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Your icon is pure win 8DDD
[info]daniela_lynx
2008-07-09 06:39 am UTC (link)
Thank you!! ^//^ And it makes sense! I didn't want to be too preachy with this one, I love open endings. It's just, the kind of open ending the game had lacked a lot and was way too sad. I'm glad you liked it!

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I only wish I had thought of it first :P
[info]relmneiko
2008-07-13 04:04 am UTC (link)
That's good. :P I know, only Aigis really had a chance to say goodbye. I hear they explain a lot in The Answer part of FES, but I still haven't gotten 'round to playing it.

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[info]joyfacedown
2008-07-08 12:40 pm UTC (link)
me gusta mucho este final, creo que me lo voy a quedar como si fuese el real :D

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[info]daniela_lynx
2008-07-09 06:45 am UTC (link)
Wooo, ¿en serio? Me halaga que le guste así tanto! *w* C-creo que yo también lo prefiero. Es culpa del FES ;.;

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[info]joyfacedown
2008-07-09 01:28 pm UTC (link)
hehe. todavía no he jugado el FES, lo tengo ahi, pero on hold D: aunque ya he leido por ahí mas o menos que pasa en "the answer" y bueno, me emociona jugarlo.

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[info]nyxmidnight
2008-07-13 05:15 pm UTC (link)
;O;

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[info]daniela_lynx
2008-07-16 07:11 pm UTC (link)
<33 *Holds you*

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[info]natsumi_chian
2008-08-02 04:59 am UTC (link)
wu-wuyuuu TT___TT
I love how you write it, it's kinda sad but happy at the same time TT____TT
great work! keep it up! <3<3

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